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Nick's avatar

I really enjoyed the story and the sharp dialogue helped keep it moving. A speed date is such a great setting for a short story because that is, essentially, what it is in the real world.

I completely empathize with preferring to write dialogue as well, but do think it can suit short stories. Hemingway's "A Clean, Well-Lighted Place" is a great example of that.

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Thomas Hannigan's avatar

Very good! It must have been interesting to put yourself inside a woman's mind.

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Eliot Wilson's avatar

A challenge, which is one reason I did it, I hope with some degree of conviction.

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Mariella Hunt's avatar

Excellent story - I especially love the ending sentence. I’ve always wanted to write short stories but I can’t ever keep them short, myself!

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Eliot Wilson's avatar

That’s very kind. I struggle: concise is not my most prominent quality.

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